a few things for feedback (since you werent there today mister! *cough*) :P
1. LOOK AT ALL YOU HAVE DONE IN StoryBoard! SO FRIKKEN PROUD OF YOU!!!!
2. your music is SO dramatic...idk if thats a good thing or not,its flirting with that line of being a little bit overboard...but you are the artist :D
3. There were a LOT of "ew" moments for me. I wish you left a little more up to imagination... specifically: - the heads on the wall, if they have been there a while wouldnt still have bright red blood spurting out of them..maybe lose the blood. - LOVED the silhouette behind him...but i dont think you need to show the action shot of him getting his head chopped off...EW. lol - SO MUCH BLOOD.
...thats it. take it or leave it. Either way i'm proud of all the things you have accomplished with this.
thank you very much monica, I will take the advice it is coming down to the end i think Ill stick with it for now dont worry it will look so much better once I try Maya next.
a few things for feedback (since you werent there today mister! *cough*) :P
ReplyDelete1. LOOK AT ALL YOU HAVE DONE IN StoryBoard! SO FRIKKEN PROUD OF YOU!!!!
2. your music is SO dramatic...idk if thats a good thing or not,its flirting with that line of being a little bit overboard...but you are the artist :D
3. There were a LOT of "ew" moments for me. I wish you left a little more up to imagination... specifically:
- the heads on the wall, if they have been there a while wouldnt still have bright red blood spurting out of them..maybe lose the blood.
- LOVED the silhouette behind him...but i dont think you need to show the action shot of him getting his head chopped off...EW. lol
- SO MUCH BLOOD.
...thats it. take it or leave it. Either way i'm proud of all the things you have accomplished with this.
thank you very much monica, I will take the advice it is coming down to the end i think Ill stick with it for now dont worry it will look so much better once I try Maya next.
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